I would like to ask of you for help. since English is not my main-language and i don't practice writing novels in English that often. can you help me. my grade in english in school were good, but that donīt say much when it really comes down to writing.
Two women stared at a bottle in a brown package, the black fluid in the glass-container giving off an eerie shine.
The blonde woman, Alex, recipient of the package, picked up the bottle. examining it with sceptic eyes.
"No, i don't want to drink it, this is stupid."
The black-haired Woman, Jill, frowned annoyed.
"Well, it was not me who went to a voodoo mumbojumbo-shop for help in her love-life. I mean, come on.
Picking up the note in the package, Jill read out loud "this will grant you your deepest desire", if it were that easy, then weīd see
allot more shops like that all over town, and things would become kinda boring if things worked out so perfectly."
Alex returned the annoyed frown, pouting, looking down on the bottle. Jillīs expression lightened up.
"Sorry, I know youīre worried Sam donīt feel the same for you, but trust me, I see how he looks at you.
You may think your dull in appearance, but I say you have a beautiful body, and a warm personality, I am positive Sam sees that too.
I mean, you are my best friend since WAY back."
Touched by the warm sincere words of her best friend, the women embraced each other. Alex looked back at the bottle.
"I still feel it would be a kind of waste to just throw it away... what should we do?"
"Simple, Jill replied, grabbing the bottle from her friend's hand. I will drink it."
"NO, you canīt do that, what if its dangerous." Alex said, concerned, grabbing her friend's hand.
"Says the girl who herself was ready to drink." Jill Said teasingly to her friend.
"it's probably just some bitter herbs and spices mixed with booze, giving the magic effect of heartburn and intoxication.
Iīll treat you to a drink later for the potion."
Alex reluctantly let go of her friend's hand.
"Fine, but iīll be ready with the phone" She said.
"Yeah yeah, and later you can help me with you-know-what." Jill replied, Already removing the cork.
Both woman looked at each other, it was Now or never.
"Bottoms up, Jill said as she lifter the bottle exaggerating, like drinking a shot at the bar.
Tasting the fluid, her expression turned to surprise, emptying the bottle.
"Not bad, odd after-taste, but drinkable." Jill said smiling reassuring to her friend.
Her expression suddenly changed, grabbing her throat. Choking noises.
"OHMYGOD OHMYGOD NO NO NO i knew this was a bad idea." Said Alex, and fumbled with the phone in a panic.
"AH, got ya. Jill exclaimed, and grabbed her scared friends hand.
"DONīT DO THAT, geez, almost gave me a Heart-attack, Alex Said breathing heavily, slapping her friend's arm.
"Come on, im sorry, i couldn't resist." Said Jill as she hugged her friend.
"see, im fine, no need to worry. come on, now we can get over it and you can help me put on my new outfit."